school days. My First Chapter check it out!! Posted by Megan A on November 09, 2016 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments AnonymousNovember 10, 2016 at 5:00 PMHi Eli, You really are an author! I love how you have used the speech marks to show talking and how you have used ellipsis to show (or infer) that Zoe was a bit shy or anxious. Well done, I can't wait to read more.Mrs MacKinnonReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousNovember 13, 2016 at 12:53 AMWell done Eli! This is a great piece of writing. Your story really caught me. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!!Mum :-)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment
Hi Eli,
ReplyDeleteYou really are an author! I love how you have used the speech marks to show talking and how you have used ellipsis to show (or infer) that Zoe was a bit shy or anxious. Well done, I can't wait to read more.
Mrs MacKinnon
Well done Eli! This is a great piece of writing. Your story really caught me. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!!
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