My writing goal Term 3

My learning goals


Writing: To use words and phrases to link paragraphs.  I feel good about my speech because I used words to link the paragraphs. Here is proof.

Music is better than sports because Music keeps you calm and relaxed, makes you happy it also helps you with your school work.  I believe that Music is better than sports because I feel calm when I listen to it, it helps me calm down when I am angry, makes me happy when I am sad and it makes feel free.


Music is relaxing.  Sports is frustrating! Like in soccer or touch rugby I never get the  ball and calling for it is bad enough cause you have to yell then you get a sore throat and when everyone else in your team gets the ball you get the names mixed up when you call for it, sport is tiring because you run everywhere and it mostly starts right in the morning at about 7:30.  Singing makes you calm and its lots of fun.  

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